Selfish Love

Selfish Love

Love is desperately pleading 

your own life be taken before

another so ones self does not 

have to endure the pain of losing

the other. 

Reviews

[wordman]

sounds like true love to me,loved it

[Emily L]

Thanks for the review, happy you enjoyed!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[conversations with her ..]

short yet so meaningful, you have a way with your words...

im stunned

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[Emily L]

Sure, I would love to!

[J. B.]

i like how sweet and simple this is... and how it's a run-on statement; it adds to the flow of the piece. good work.

[Emily L]

Thank you for your kind words Jerimiah, im happy you enjoyed!

[KCthelastboyscout]

A relatable statement. Sometimes something this powerful only needs to be stated in a few words

[Emily L]

I couldn't agree more, thank you very much:)

[Kate]

Wow, in a few words, you can tell a lot. I had to reread it several times. There´s more to it than one could think when taking into consideration the lenght of the poem. Inspiring. Well done!

[Emily L]

Thank you very kindly Kate. I've always felt this was the true definition of love for myself personally, even when it is this short in length. Thanks again for the review, i'm happy you enjoyed!

[Caroline]

i like it ! !!! very deep

[Emily L]

Well thank you Caroline!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Oh man, this was beautiful!

[Emily L]

Thank you:)