Forever indept

What would you do if your heart needed to stay, but the right thing to do, is to walk away...

The pain is like a throbbing heat, aching in my chest. I know that I should stop tell him to leave, that I can't do this any-more but I can't, I need him. To say goodbye would be like tearing out half of my heart. He helped me when I was down, picked me up whenever I fell, he helped me to survive when I thought it was all over. Yes he loves me more then I ever could love him, but to think of him leaving is to press my hand down hard onto a bed of nails. I could never love him when my heart is aching for another's embrace but I do love him, in a different way. We are joined together, forever whether we like it or not, our paths have crossed, our destinies aligned, we need each other, though I probably need him more then he needs me, but either way it doesn't matter. We understand each other better than any other person in the world. The trust and compassion we have for one another can never be replaced. I close my eyes, try to imagine him with someone else, lips touching, arms wrapped around one another, but I cant. My whole person shies away from the idea of him belonging to anyone but me. I need him and I can never forget that.

Author's Note

Before anyone asks, no this was not inspired by Bella and Jacobs relationship in Twilight, rather by my own experience...

Reviews

[Ragin Cajun]

On this piece you have it listed as a story. I find that is more poetic in nature. I would shorten up the sentences and make it look more like poetry. It is very deep, I think the raw emotion you want to express would be better suited for the poetry genre.

[MoriartyMesa]

Not knowing much of the series, this has a very pre- mid evil flow about it, not totally Roman or Greek, but a lot of myth an romance.

[Kyle]

You are thoughful and descriptive in your writing....I think your sentences should be shorter though. This sounds more like a letter than poetry.....you should think about removing a few words per sentence to allow your readers to fill in the blanks here. Just a few thoughts.....

Please dont take offence.

[Archia]

I like the depth in this and what it's saying.

[The Shadow of the Dawn]

it's beautiful it makes you realy feel what the persons going through, and if you hadn't said anything about the twilight thing i wouldn't have noticed :)