The Eternal Fool

The Eternal Fool

A Poem by King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)
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a Sonnet written for a creative writing class turned into something which is much more meaningful

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To whom is thy hearts beauty given true,

 

Whose beauty is greater than that of

 

Any meandering streams deepest blue,

 

Agleam with sunlight which is thy blue love,

 

Release thy self from thine constant sorrow,

 

Release Past unfit of such divinity,

 

And when finished, my heart you may borrow,

 

I only ask its held infinitely,

 

With sorrow substituted by much joy,

 

Only good comes from this mended future,

 

And from happiness, be born a boy,

 

If none other, this I can assure,

 

Suspended by strings of love, a jewel,

 

For thee, I shall be an Eternal Fool.



dedicated to: Sydney Rae Slaughter Littrel Aftab

© 2016 King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)


Author's Note

King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)
This is meant to be read similar to that of Shakespeare`s work.

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'Suspended by strings of love a jewel, For the, I shall be an eternal fool.' - What an elegant piece of writing. You have an amazing talent- this intricate piece touched my heart. & I truly enjoyed the Shakespearean style.

'Release thy self from thine constant sorrow,
Release Past unfit of such divinity,
And when finished, my heart you may borrow,'

Pure brilliance- I really love this piece. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm pretty sure this is my strongest work thus far, and is by far my favorite, I'm glad y.. read more
jdr / Jennifer

6 Years Ago

I had to read it several times- and then read it to a friend... ;) It really is a wonderfully wri.. read more
King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

thank you very much



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Well done! I too have tried to walk in the footsteps of sonnet writers. It is a slippery slope indeed. Sometime people just don't get what it was that you were going for...for me that ok though...I think one should be able to take away what they want form any of my works. Again Well done! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
an artist isn't in the rite if he doesn't find that of himself that doesn't want to be found, not saying i have, were all striving, take a walk, dont eat, maybe dont sleep a couple nights, find yourself insane and you will find the center of your expression
ya got potential
karl

Posted 6 Years Ago


King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

I might just have to try that, might make for interesting piece self dixcovery and all, but thank y.. read more
'Suspended by strings of love a jewel, For the, I shall be an eternal fool.' - What an elegant piece of writing. You have an amazing talent- this intricate piece touched my heart. & I truly enjoyed the Shakespearean style.

'Release thy self from thine constant sorrow,
Release Past unfit of such divinity,
And when finished, my heart you may borrow,'

Pure brilliance- I really love this piece. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm pretty sure this is my strongest work thus far, and is by far my favorite, I'm glad y.. read more
jdr / Jennifer

6 Years Ago

I had to read it several times- and then read it to a friend... ;) It really is a wonderfully wri.. read more
King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

thank you very much
This is amazing. I really like it. It's a beautiful piece of work :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

6 Years Ago

Thank you

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Added on February 1, 2013
Last Updated on October 18, 2016
Tags: Sonnet, english sonnets, love sonnets, love, romance

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King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)
King Wolfe (Dylan A. King)

Stokesdale, NC



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I am a newly self-discovered poet from Winston-Salem, North Carolina and I created this page to share my work and hopefully become discovered enough to become published, well there you have it the r.. more..

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