Six feet under

I'm going through a little rough part of my life right now. It's a bit depressing and I'm sorry.

A broken heart
A burnt soul
Flowers died and so have I
With pain all over and voices in my head
There killing me
Slowly but painfully
You probably think I'm going crazy
But I guess that's the way they all see me
I scream for help but nobody can hear
I cry tears that nobody can see
I died last night for As I could not cope
I'm being berried six feet under
Where I belong.
Where there is peace.
I can hear the cries of them all
Laying in there beds crying and wishing they could be dying,
You will never know how much pain I'm in,
For I have been berried six feet under with the silent screams.
With lonely nights I lay in my coffin,
Wishing I could see the light of the moon one more time.
To feel the warm sun on my face,
But that's all gone now. Because I am finally in peace and out of pain
laying in my coffin six feet under.

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

Your dark song is so powerful; so meaningful. I hid my night music when I was suffering with depression. I am thankful you can be honest and open about these shadows you're walking through, and I hope you can find some peace and light soon. I know it's meant for you. xo

[Cody]

This is actually pretty damn impressive. You should become a song writer.

[Stephen]

Thanks for expressing your thoughts. It was good that you expressed how you feel through your writing. I struggle with depression and know where you are coming from. I have my ups and downs as I am sure you do. I hope that you find away that you are able to cope with it, maybe it's through writing. It has definitely helped me out. I like escaping into my imaginations sometimes. Thanks for sharing

[Some Kind of Poet]

I agree, don't be sorry. Depression is a horrible thing, it's like you're drowning but able to breath. You're only fifteen, and one day it's going to get better for you. You'll look back on your younger days as you get older and you'll be able to say: I beat it. And that's an accomplishment you can always be proud of.

As for this piece of writing, I love it. Your depression has brought out a dark, powerful and meaningful piece of literature. I look forward to reading more from you, and I look forward to the day you get past all of this!

[Stan Lee]

Don't be sorry Tanya. This is an excellent piece of writing. Very deep and meaningful. I hope you feel the warm sun on your face again soon.
:) xo

[Tanya]

Thank you very much for reading :) i was a bit scared people wouldn't like it. I'll get out of my depression one day :)

[Echoes of Eros]

I know you will get out one day, and when you do please keep one hand in the shadows to help pull others into the light that you're becoming. :)

[Heno Zwarts]

...depressed writers and dark times makes for best writing ...like taking a photo of your spirit and imbuing to a picture frame of a time long forgotten