suicide devil

this about someone that was taken over controlled by there feelings and end up into suicide thoughts

Falling in suicide

Hate burns in love

Becoming one divide

Tears fall from above

What’s there to hide?

Showing to prove

One do not provide

You’re one to love

Ask for forgiveness

To sounds of broken tears

Could never be mistaken

Words couldn’t hear

My thoughts were taken

By one I fear

We come one as we waken

Over taken the years

Darkness becoming me

Who I was, was gone

This suicide devil couldn’t be

My life is done

Light I couldn’t see

I wasn’t strong

Now I’m gone

Disappearing from light

Never could be replace

Mistaking what’s right

Could never embrace

Could never fight

A life I couldn’t face

Trying will all my might

Couldn’t get enough space

Reviews

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

:)

[realmwriter]

Interesting topic. I like it. Some spelling errors but it's still very good.

[Ellie Howard]

i love it, it's subtle, yet i think it's on of your best pieces :D awesome job