Love at First Sight

The conscious turn coat cloak swirling around three hundred sixty degrees
Clockwise long and outward reaching an intense face-to-face halt
Freely thinking inside projecting further past the thin solid walls of body
Standing deep pumping with the heart igniting a passionate spark,
Which jump-starts another part

Opening a new, "Chamber of the Heart"
Moving energy swiftly within that dashing coruscate
The first moment of impact and intent spans for the soul in a dance
Promoting a chance to rhythmically travel as one in many tightly woven hairs
Flowin' in the manner the Earth's chosen to blow in unison

Directing posture delicately pondering dramatic preceding of this unmatched meeting
Unique - silent first words uttered in a fashion of birds
The way music guides your path
Breathing…in, and…out
Pulling about and kissing the most royal pout

Eyes closed
Loosing oneself
Emerging from a long submersion
Drawing-in air and growing stars
As the eyes collide and subconscious explodes

Leaving only that first look, meant to be
Stunned by the performed beauty of thee to free me
Fully replying slowly to truly see
The angelic nature of her emotionally thought-out gesture
Persona twirling in circles counterclockwise towards the best for

Laying skin down is a must
Exploring the inner-core's structured bust
Making it incredibly real to trust
The instance stopping in time before the next breath
Having the following one to enjoy precious matter

Between the brief change from perfect fundamental relief
Enkindles belief in, "Love at First Sight"
Understanding then what a peace of mind truly is
Wrapping up one's physical form ineptly complete
Living this instance forever

Author's Note

A deep true moment with who in mind just before I go rest my head in time. :)



Enjoy! X Thank You!!!

Reviews

After the "Big Bang" science, Einstein believed everything was technically round, and as relativity theory, slightly equalized with quantum mechanics, this beautiful write of you made me think into that again. Round, as everything can be round, and spinning, in 360 even 380 degrees, x time makes miles, or kilometers. Distance is relative, as your words, are timeless. As true love can be... and you know it as no other. You have nailed this in your very well knowing self, and wrote it out as only a master can look into the core of fundamental relief, and in that Enkindles belief! and let go your precious head, to rest in time. Yeah great great write here! 100

E.L.
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[BreeBree1983]

Amazing.. Beautiful. I loved it!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ooooo..i love this a lot. That passionate love! OOOhh how amazing it is.
The love between the two is something to be treasured. I love your words. It's deep and meaningful. And it gives me such a painted vision... love it...
Oh how love can be pure as you write.. we all long for that. ^u^ To be true and to give one's self to that person we love only.. the love will burst so much one will be spreading so much passion around. ha ha. I highly enjoyed this read.
Well done!! A true artist through writing... ~ Perfect!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Standing deep pumping with the heart igniting a passionate spark, The first moment of impact and intent spans for the soul in a dance Unique - silent first words uttered in a fashion of birds Eyes closed Leaving only that first look, meant to be Laying skin down is a must Living this instance forever...........Love that is meant to be.....lovely

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The kiss ignites the passion, but it is the sight of her that jump-starts his heart!...This is Wonderfully written. Brilliant work!