A rose is not just a rose

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder

You picked me as the best to satisfy you

You placed me in your private chamber

With great care, you nourished my soul

And shined the warmest sun down on me

And feed me the finest food and purest water

Your tenderness and care gave me strength

To grow, to blossom and bloom

Now you can enjoy my beautiful perfection

My beauty gives you delight day after day

Pride swells in you when others stare in awe

I live to hear your voice’s gentle whispers

To feel your hands as you softly caress

My young , slim limbs as I reach out

I wait anxiously for your fingers to stroke

My tender petals, each one a joy to you

You delight in my sweet aroma

So I am devoted, solidly grounded

To give you this pleasure, each

And every day, of spring and summer

In the winter's cold, you let me slumber

Reviews

[Jibey]

Clever trick.. with its soft fragrance and sensual feel...

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Jibey/525772/?&p=1

[Masquerade]

This is such a beautiful poem. You did an awesome job on this one! It reminds me of my piece "Love is like a Flower". I haven't posted it here yet but it's on PW & PS. You are very talented and I always enjoy your writes.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

you are awsome girl....what a lovely heart you have, so soft and beautiful! x0x0x

[M. View]

Your tenderness and care gave me strength
To grow, to blossom and bloom

That stands out to it is tender and sweet to say to some one or anout some one or thing. I read this four time before I reviewed it because i could not find the word to say how much i like this poem beside I like.
Great Write