It's Been Said Before And After, Worse And Better

Some more light-verse

There are stars in the night sky
No
There are lights that adorn a darkened sky.
No
A shrouded, beclouded atmosphere
is huddling about isolated orbs.
No
There are twinkling somethings
navigating through the opposite of daylight.
No
Wait…
No
There are various tears in midnight’s blanket
No!
There are millions of holes punched in
black by divine white bullets.
No
There’s a whole bunch of white things
on a big, black thing.
No
There are mystical crystal flickerlings
pecked in some sprawling onyx draperies.
Hell No!
There are stars in the night sky
Yes

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

This is a very interesting poem. The questioning style is interesting and original. It makes the reader ponder and it makes me wonder whether the person questioning is a child or a poet or whether the answerer is a child or a philosopher. Very thought provoking indeed. And almost philosophical yet innocent in its wonderment and questioning. It reminds me in some way of a Jean-Luc Godard film and of the book Sophie's World.

[Adelia Alighieri]

I enjoyed how indecisive a poet can be, yet he figures out the best for his poem.
This is real good. Great lines:
"There are mystical crystal flickerlings
pecked in some sprawling onyx draperies."

[Nobody.]

HAHAAHA! Yes those rerun scenes we write as poets can be a b*****d of a bear to tackle....and sometimes, it's just better to call it what it is. This looks like my own personal notes when I get that uninspired haze that wraps around my head and smothers my best intentions. This is great poetry.

it was origianl and had awesome style. i loved it, i cant wait to read more.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Loved this very original piece your writing style varies and shoes on many levels why your such a great writer well done keep them coming

[Disillusioned]

Haha, love it. Yes, so little is original anymore. Sometimes the simple way is the best way and embellishment and change can be over rated.

[roarke]

No,
"It was a dark and stormy night..."

I see you are familiar with my writing process.... and I wonder why I don't get more written...

fun stuff, entertaining as always.