Leaving my dear

Leaving my dear

A Poem by Eternal.Dreamer

A flame is burning inside me;

And it gets bigger when I see;

The perfection walking in front of me, gracefully;

And from thee, my sight becomes foggy.


It's getting hard to see the picture clear;

And it's all because of my dear;

My eyes are slowly losing their sight;

I cannot get rid of him, he is present in my mind.


Go away, disappear, just go;

I will be leaving soon I perfectly know;

I am afraid to get close and it goes on my nerve;

That is the reason why from distance I just observe.


I make a step forward and then go back;

No, I cannot survive one more wreck;

I do not have the courage, love is all I have;

It's so strong that it screams, but I pretend I'm deaf.


Maybe I will see him again, who knows?

All I know is that I can feel inside my bones;

That I will remember him until the day I die;

Oh, I will always be in love with that guy.

© 2010 Eternal.Dreamer


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This is so great too! It seems like you were afraid to get closer, but do I discern that you did not even actually have a close relationship with him? Was the poem meant to say that you were letting go too afraid to get closer? Or was it even just in passing?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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@A.L.Z. - We were just friends at the time I was in America and I knew that at some point I'll go back in my country so I didn't want to get closer, I was burnt once already.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so great too! It seems like you were afraid to get closer, but do I discern that you did not even actually have a close relationship with him? Was the poem meant to say that you were letting go too afraid to get closer? Or was it even just in passing?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Posted 11 Years Ago


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this is awesome...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

strong emotion-good job(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


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welcome to writerscafe i am just another member, keep with your nice poems

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Eternal.Dreamer

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