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Morning Calm

Morning Calm

A Poem by ettorney
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Haiku

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steel on still water

with time's passing all we build
fades like memory

© 2011 ettorney


Author's Note

ettorney
Haiku for Devon's Picture This contest.

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There's a lot of weight and presence within such few words. I'm not a fan of Haikus, but this example says more than the average and has stronger meaning. I believe that if you choose a limiting structure then you might as well make sure you have something to say. And this does.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Lots of impact for a few short words. Tears a hole in your mind, that invites the reader to look deeper. Nice!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this speaks to me... whereas a lot of Haiku words don't...(to me anyway) :-/

Thanks for share....clever
Babs x

Posted 7 Years Ago


The first haiku to EVER make sense! YAY! I hate when they are like
Leaves are fluttering
Wind rustling them from branches
Pinapples speak Greek
Lol but I really like the shortness of this and the way it flowas and makes a complete poem not just words. It doesn't seem forced.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Much said in few words.I think you have expressed a lot in those three lines..so apt..

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's a lot of weight and presence within such few words. I'm not a fan of Haikus, but this example says more than the average and has stronger meaning. I believe that if you choose a limiting structure then you might as well make sure you have something to say. And this does.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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ettorney
ettorney

Chicago, IL



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I love to write. I love the process of writing. I’ve been gone from writing for a decade! Time to get back on the horse, don’t ya think? Although not perfect myself, I hate bad gra.. more..

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