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A Poem by Evelynn

hello my star, my wondrous light

did you pack your bags for your long flight

good morning my sun, shining so bright

i hope you are swimming in delight


good night my sea, my favorite tune

i wonder, do you think of me too

goodbye my heart, my strawberry moon

this time we won’t see each other soon

© 2023 Evelynn


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goodbye my heart, my strawberry moon
this time we won’t see each other soon

I loved this part. This is well written. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Interesting write.
Especially your last rhyme.
Borders on depressive.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lovely, makes me think of how I feel without my family.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A pleasant reverie with a somber down turn at the end, makes one slightly fearful the heart may not remember all the it was. Thanks for the post- carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


A wonderful dance of words dear Evelynn. To leave a beautiful place is always difficult. But the memories and photos. Keep us hoping to visit again. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Evelynn
Evelynn

Roanoke, VA



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