sonic gang

sonic gang

A Poem by Evelynn

fake friends, real memories

bright lights, hazy dreams

loud laughs, silent fights

cold shoulders, no goodbyes

© 2020 Evelynn


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Few people befriend us forever dear Evelynn. The twisted tale of friendship. I hope you are doing well, be careful and stay safe. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A lesson I learned is you quickly figure out who are friends and acquaintances. Love the title.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A true friend is almost as rare as a true love they are a thing to be cherished dear Evelynn your lines scrawl a poignant message and feeling

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

we can be coerced easily enough by what seems real but isn't...and that which might have been suspect might turn out to produce "no goodbyes"---
I like this because it appears as two poems, side by side...like two friends side by side...
one finally seeing the other for who that person really is.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This struck hard. I have been through this many times, and the "no goodbyes" is a line I am well familiar with.
Friendship seems meanlingless nowdays, a term that is used lightly or has just become a number on social media.
I think you captured this very well. Despite being written with short simple lines, it is all that is needed. The emotions behind the words, the feeling of loss, sorrow, bitterness and perhaps even regret are all there. There is also a sense of wistful nostalgia. It certainly strikes a chord.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true.

It's tough to get a genuine one!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

true, loyal friends are hard to come by. so much easier saying hello than goodbye. only when the wheels come off do we find out. great title, your words pack a punch of truth - right in the kisser ... :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very few friends these days, your words bring memories to my heart of days of laughs and good old days.I miss my old friends, Some are dead, some have changed moving on forever to become someone else. Nice words.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Few people befriend us forever dear Evelynn. The twisted tale of friendship. I hope you are doing well, be careful and stay safe. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
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This sounds to me like communication on this web site in between some strange people here.

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nikola Tesla once claimed he could record thought somehow by reflecting light off a person's retina. It turned out to be nonsense but your poem reminded me of that. Not the nonsense part but the futility of trying to record moments in time as they are objectively, as a picture without subjective interpretation.

Posted 6 Months Ago



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