‘Confusion’

Lost clarity - out of bounds🌹

‘Confusion’

Confusion
Is
When the mind
Has lost
All track
Of
Time-

When there’s no
Sign of
What’s
Yours or
Mine

When your
Thoughts
Turn
Around
And there’s
No
Balance
Or
Up and
Down

Confusion
Clouds
All sight
Around

The sound
You hear
Is
All but
Clear
And you
Don’t want
Anyone
Near-

But that’s
The biggest
Fear
Losing
What’s
So near...

Kelly Fagelund- Gjersoe
15 January 2010

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... love the song🎶... “and when I grow too old to dream, I’ll have you to remember”. But when I grow too old to remember, I will talk to flowers 🌸 and sing with the birds and fly away. A poem close to my heart and soul when confusion appears. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh how wonderful are the words of your heart attached to places and depths few dare venture- love the words talk to flowers sing with the birds and fly away- the song I want at my funeral- one glad morningvehen this life is over I’ll fly away- wonderful to just up and gently fly away to a word awaiting- Thankyou for your always wonderful gentle caring words and thought- touches a heart in many special ways- blessings to you always🌹

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you dear heart...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure a hundred fold🌹

[Neville]

There is more truth here than might at first meet the eye...... a nice, straight forward write for sure.....N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes it is so- on of my writes in many times of sitting and pondering on life- this was when I finally separated from my ex husband after being in an abusive relationship from 1999- 2010- was reflecting on emotions that had been kept caged in and how confusion affects us and others where we need to see if for what it is and free ourselves from it- I’m glad you connected with words- Thankyou I appreciate🌹

[Neville]

I sense you made the right decision... that is a very long time to be a victim of any kind of abuse & sincerely hope your world is now a much better place......N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes it is - much to be grateful and thankful for but still waiting upon the special soulmate that will complete my heart- what will be will be but I’m now free to be me and choose how my life unfolds- Thankyou for your kind words and time I do appreciate🌹

[Neville]

Hey, my pleasure my friend & just you take care now, ya hear.... N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Will do Thankyou for your kindness🌹

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Confusion is like an annoying piece of gun in your hair, you have to scrub it off slowly and gently before it rips off all it can.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Too true- it can rip your mind out taking your soul and spirit along with it- Thankyou for your thoughts and time I appreciate it🌹

[sette]

and sometimes fate has other plans for us

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes always that point as well- we never know what tomorrow holds so one day at a time to ensure we stay in perfect track of time according to what’s meant to be - only thing we can be sure of is change..Thankyou for popping in I appreciate🌹

[sette]

you are welcome

[Einstein Noodle]

the form and internal rhyming make me feel like i am spinning in a cycle from beginning to end ...i like the use of alliteration too ... i think it elevates a very straight forward presentation of such a real human condition .. i think its also very universal ... as i read i can think of so many things that confuse me ..more and more as i get older ;)))) loosing track of time at the top of your list is significant ...its a frightening thing if some type of dementia is setting in :(
the irony of how we push away ... yet fear loosing that exact same thing is so true ... i just shake my head , Thoughts in Time, and walk away ... to pray ;}
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sometimes that’s all we can do and at times the best as well- Thankyou for time you take to review and read much appreciated🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

yep..it sure is ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear Kelly. Fear of losing things near. make new places more scary. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and thoughts. I love your work.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Fear needs to be faced and we need to do what it is that I heart needs to do- all is possible always- faith is needed to overcome fear- Thankyou for taking time I sppreciate🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I pray and hope. You are welcome dear Kelly.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we lose those closest to you, even though they are still in proximity, physically, that is the worst.
they see us and hear us, yet they don't...either because of a mental state of mind, or an emotional state of the heart.
j.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

So sad but true- broken communication is death beyond dying- when you cannot reach the person trapped inside themselves the empty lifeless hollow shell- makes you die a bit more each time you try to get a response- in the end you tried- best just walk away until they come to realise one day- if they do- Thankyou for sharing in my thoughts and feelings- I appreciate your heart🌹