A Dream

An old poem from 2007. dedicated to my ex Sandra.. Damn i was happy back then

You came to my door

You tears were running

I tried to comfort you

To stop you from crying

Your face is to pretty

To have tears running down

I felt a hit to the gut when you kissed me

Well I knew that wasn’t real

To good to be true

I am in love

I am in love with you

I live for you

A Fallen Hero - A Dream

Written - a lonely evening in the spring of 2007

Dedication - Sandra The Last Love I had before everything went wrong

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Sometime we need the good memories to awake the mind and heart. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

It's beautiful! Keep up the fantastic work and thanks for sharing! :D

[Drako]

aw, i wonder what happened with you and her. when you love, you love hard. this poem, though it was short, showed that quite clearly. you're one who loves completely, with all your heart and soul. that's what makes it so hard for you to deal with the end of the relationships, i think. i understand, because i'm the same way. great write

[Chelsea]

Loved it! This is my favourite by far of your poetry.
The lines were so simply written, yet so impactful.
You really created great imagery.
My favouite lines are.

To stop you from crying
Your face is to pretty
To have tears running down

There is a couple of little mistakes.
You tears were running- You, I'm guessing.... Should be your.



AMAZING! Such a sweet poem fallen :)