Last Words, I Want To Live On, Farewell.

F**k Off

She’s so overrated.

This was so complicated.

Why’d she have to kiss him

That little b***h.

Said I loved her.

She just fucked me over…

Little w***e..

To the one who understands.

Please don’t see me as a psycho.

I know I am but don’t cal me one…

I’m so scared.

Three anxiety attacks

Why won’t they leave..

Haven’t had one for a while…

Thought she loved me.

Suddenly not…

I never want love again.

Want to be free

Again freedom seems so unreal.

No more sorrow..

To much tomorrow.

Trying to stay alive is harder that I thought

Over powered by rage..

Lying to one another isn’t so great.

I found out.

Veterans still lives in my mind.

Eternal youth landscape of a lie.

On disobedience I live

No more sorrow

On another dream.

No one left to care

Not here, Not anywhere.

Hate fills me.

No, not hate.

Agony. 

Probably the best way.

To say..

I am truly sorry…

Goodbye… 

I’ll never write again…

Farewell to all.

Have a nice life…

And know to the final thing..

My wrists are bleeding again..

I smile and love that they do..

I’m not dead yet..

But I will be.. 

Farewell..

Farewell.

Farewell to you all.

All of you.

Rest in f*****g peace

Eternal rest is what I crave.

Wet slippery liquid running down my arm

Eternal rest is what I crave.

Love is another page in a lie.

Love is nothing but a lie..

I AM A LIE.

Now I Finally know.

Sorrow hitting me again.

A******s all around me again.

Disenchanting Memories.

Not anymore sorrow.

Eternal peace, Death.

Such a sucker for a sweet talker.

Such a b***h.

I AM A LIE.

JUST BELIEVE ME.

A Fallen Hero - Last Words, I want to live on, Farewell.

Written : 21/01/2011

Dedication. : Indefinable.

Author's Note

Fallen Hero's Last thing..
Please convince me to write more..
I BEG OF YOU..

Fallen

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Don't stop life, don't stop writing. If only love could be easy, is what most wish..What is life without love? What is love without life? There's always going to be a lie, always going to pain sometime in life. And Look- You may want to end it here & now, but where is suicide going to take you? One place, Hell. And that's no better place than here. Yeah, life sucks- only when God needs you to be stronger. One man's death, leads to another man's loss. That hurts people. All of us would LOVE to hear your feelings- as long as your free in your own heart & soul.

[Brook Hughes]

Truly if someone hurts you they are not worth it!.. and u dont need to screw urself over because some chicka crashed ur party.. dont let her get to you.. and keep ur head held high:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the set-up and the feel of emotion in the words. No weakness in this poem. Your words got stronger with each line. A outstanding poem. When we can still feel anger and pain. It mean we are still alive.
Coyote

[E.H. Monroe]

Such a sucker for a sweet talker.
Such a b***h

HA! This is gonna be on my f*****g tombstone next to a pair of used panties and a hammer for my goddamn toes.
The s**t gets thick Hamlet, and continues to do so. Its a sink or swim world, so you know what I do?
Bounce on some f****r's heads as I make my way across the pond.

Falling for some chick's s**t? That's normal.
Quit writing? THAT'S f*****g dumb.

[Dische]

You are an amazing writer, suicide is not worth it

[SOUL LESS]

Like you say (and so does LP) No More Sorrow! Leave out every single thing, person that hurt you in the past. Stay drunk on writing so that reality cannot destroy you. It's the perfect Catharsis. Dun QUIT WRITING.

[Chelsea]

I absolutely am not going to let you stop writing. Or giving up---- Give you head a shake! Life sometimes can feel impossibly hard! But think back of a good time. The best damn memory you can! Life gets hard, but there is a reward waiting! Just have to find it :) Enjoy life, don't give up. Your young and have many years ahead of you!
Hold on their Fallen. I promise you it's going to get better (: Message me if you want to talk---- I'm here.
xxx

[Drako]

now, you have to continue writing. you have to continue living. i don't say this for myself. i don't think you should try to live for the sake of anyone, friend, family, or lover. you should live for you. you're young. love comes in time. don't let the heartache drag you down into the dark pit of suicide. you are the most important person in your life. not any past or present love

you are a young writer with talent for expressing your emotions. use your writing as your outlet. let the pain flow from your heart to your pen (or keys as the case may be). release the pain through your art, and take the time to heal yourself. use your writing as your therapy. get all the negative out, then find something positive in yourself. wait a while, and when you're ready to try for love outside of yourself, you'll know. because you'll completely and utterly love yourself. once you do, love will find you. just remember, you have a lot ahead of you, great things, if only you stay around to see them through

[A Risen Heroine.]

Fallen you have to keep on writing!
Don't ever harm yourself!
Don't ever commit suicide!
I'll kill you if you do!
Don't get me wrong.

This piece is quite touching, filled with anger and sadness.
The poem made me cry.
Keep on writing!
Stay here for me, for everyone there's a lot of people who admire you and your writing!
Thanks for sharing and keep up the amazing work!
~A Fallen Heroine~