Jonathan Etheridge

Jonathan Etheridge.

A warrior fighting

Losing the fight.

Jonathan Etheridge 

Overlooking life’s

Not a single disobedience

A strong brother in arms.

The most encouraged soldier in the field.

His heart strong, His mind weak.

Another soldier falls before him.

Not a single tear can he afford to spare.

Eternal internal battles never ends

To many thoughts washed down in his tears.

He will never fall. He can’t fall.

Ever and ever, his lifetime in the war.

Riding strong in armored vehicles.

I can’t change the fact that he’s in Iraq.

Death can’t find him it never will.

Giving his life for all of you out there.

Eternal internal battles never ends

Jonathan Etheridge.

A dying soldier.

Lost the fight.

A Fallen Hero - Jonathan Etheridge.

Written : 23/01/2011

Dedication : Jonathan Etheridge.

Author's Note

To my dear Jonathan Etheridge.

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

You should put all of these together and read them like an epic. You have afew in this style on this topic and can easily been strung together as a poem book knitted together by a common topic.
These were some of your strongest pieces. Let em all run together

[Undying Glory]

powerful work here man, i sure like this one a lot. this was real strong and spoke true of the brave heart of a soldier. this was pretty darn vivid and very deep. "
I can’t change the fact that he’s in Iraq.
Death can’t find him it never will.
Giving his life for all of you out there.
Eternal internal battles never ends

Jonathan Etheridge.
A dying soldier.
Lost the fight."
great ending and great poem man!

[Coyote Poetry]

Soldiers pay for the sins of Governments not trying to get along. I was a soldier for 15 years. Knowing people like you know and care make a Soldier life better. We need to remember your friend and all soldiers standing tall and without fear. Thank you for remembering a Soldier.
Coyote

[OT]

very good!! you're improving rapidly and it's great to see - the word play is brilliant here - "eternal internal" - very clever!! and the subject content is obviously layered with personal emotion and that comes through! very nice!!

[Drako]

this is a really sweet piece to someone who clearly means a lot to you

[Dische]

This is REALLY REALLY good and touchiing and I'm sure it would mean a lot to anyone who lost someone to war.