Subtleties

A Poem by FallenHeroXx

My new poem

A Subtle scream

It strangles me

I want to kill her here and now

I think of her.

It scorches my soul

Making me want to kill myself

I am A Fallen Hero

At least I have her

My Fallen Heroine

She helps me

I just need to keep it up

Hate and anger

It seems to be my substitute

A Fallen Hero

At least I Fall with Her

She will perish and die

She will be burned on my f*****g cross

I will live on and cry

No! I won’t cry

That b***h will never make me cry.

That damn w***e

She always wanted more

She has to die

Then I won’t cry

A Fallen Hero - Subtleties

Written : 08/01/2011

Dedication : To show my Mentor E.H. How he has Helped me

© 2011 FallenHeroXx

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E.H. Monroe

Christ on a cracker jack
Keep it metaphorical you fiend! Lest the authorities come find you!
Sometimes a spilling a of emotional callbacks is necessay so you DON'T fall off the deep end, like primal scream therapy. It's a word vomit and drenches the cleana nd forces them to roll with the punches.
It's painful when someone takes and takes and never gives back.
and when you kill the memory you can start to live again.

Be reborn Phoenix from Denmark,
Memories can't hurt you

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Color of the Iris

Ha ha, E.H. Monroe... "Christ on a cracker jack" rofl, that was funny.

This piece was full of rage and hate for a "she" somewhere that apparently hurt you, and so now she must suffer the pain that she made you endure... Priceless, my friend, you captivate the mind uniquely, great job. 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago

Red Brick Keshner

This could be the poetic definition of the classic villain. Ah, how the hero has tripped and fallen - hurting both self and the object of the hero's love.