Thought's ´| Collab

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Ashes and blood.

His wings are growing

Her mind is weakening

The words are stronger than ever.

Anger and disappointment 

The fallen soldiers are scattered in His eternal quest for love

She’s sick of all these people

They never love truly

She disappointed Him

His anger ever so clear

Even though She wants Him

She could never love Him

All thoughts telling him no

He needs her he loves her.

She lights a cig.

Thinking why aren’t we together.

 

A Fallen Hero and Life is Blue - Thoughts

Written : 15/01/2011

Dedication : undedicated 

Author's Note

Collab between me and Life is Blue. He should have put it up to so you can see it there as well.. Review his.. He needs a bit of different opinions.

A Fallen Hero

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The questions we ask after the deeds are done. I met many people who would tell me. I should of done that or this. I don't pay attention to them. Life is now. Looking back at yesterday will leave you with a empty glass of joy and pleasure to drink when you need to look back. Better to dance and celebrate life then cry tears of disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[E.H. Monroe]

Because if the world teaches us anything, its that the person you are destined to be with has other plans, different views and a hearty case of the "look the other way's"

A nice thinker this one

[Color of the Iris]

I recommend you read the books "The Fallen" by Thomas E. Sneigoski and, or "Fallen" and "Torment" by Lauren Kate... you write a lot like these two great authors... hope you enjoy them... 100/100

~ Iris ~

[Kathryn Saunders]

Collabs are great, but often they are very difficult to do. However, I think this is a great example of a collab well done. Both of you did very well, I'm impressed. 10/10

[Nothing Personal]

When I read collaborative works, I don't understand how it works. As in who contributes what? This piece strikes to me as a dark, less informative , more introspective write..A good ending two lines..Like the 2 line stanza format..

[Drako]

i like this collaboration thing you're doing. the blending of styles makes for some interesting reads. and you two flow so well from each other. i like how one of you has the male role, one the female.