She Rises

 

She Rises.

Dawn and night-clouds part the horizon,
Dark muddy blues turn suddenly light
Spilling change on her hues as she rises,
And oh that fullness of sight.

Glow of greeting bequests later heat-time,
Brazen sun brooks no trace of the night.
She aims to captivate dark guilelessly
With oh such flourish of style.

Her blush in pale sky flashes a brightness
Over first tremble of her prelude to fire.
She welcomes day by blazing sublimely  
In oh what a show of surprise

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This poem is my prayer for everyone who's feeling trapped or stressed or sick in our current times of lockdown . . . a poem like this can free a person's spirit, no matter where he/she must be sequestered. I love how your title suggests a human woman & I kinda expected a message of standing up for something, but was pleasantly surprised to find a completely different kind of "she" and a completely different kind of "rising"! This is how I feel about mornings & then some! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fay Slimm]

Yes - testing times are here at the moment for so many dear friend - am so glad you found the words of She Rises a comfort and help and am sending warm hugs hoping you are safe and well - -- the U.K. by the way is locking down firmly this coming weekend...... (cuddles and smiles) from Fay

[Neville]

How absolutely amazing Fay.... tis like you painted these words with a dawn rainbow dipped pen... A sight for sore eyes and summat to behold and true...

Neville

[Fay Slimm]

You are as ever so so kind and thank you mon ami for reviewing so fervently my version of "She Rises."

[Neville]

You are more than deserving and always welcome 😎

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so beautiful....i don't think there is anything prettier than when nature shows us a sunset or sunrise in all its glory...
both are untainted by human hands or breath.....she is the queen and lets us know in no uncertain terms.
j.

[Fay Slimm]

yes she most surely is queen of delights is Nature my friend - so pleased you enjoyed reading my few words about how " She Rises."

[Fay Slimm]

I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope it helps to illuminate the waiting until summer arrives in the U.K. again.