A species of hate.

I am not a religious person. I just found it effective in writing this.

Oh plead with me my fellow peer!

What have I forsaken on this heavenly day?

My life a meaningless path to non-existence?

A burden on societies progression?

I can assure you I am of peaceful thought!

Never have I harmed a soul!

The blood of others may stain my arms...

But my ideals are purely innocent!

Contradiction you must believe?

Only blood of sinners linger on me!

The wretched beings on this land!

The parasites of Utopian pleasures!

I cleanse this horrid species of wrongdoers!

For the generations of saints to come!

Do I belong with those tainted creatures?

For I have surely sinned my soul to filth.

Dear blissful friend you understand my aspiration?

I have sacrificed my rights of heavenly passage for others.

My haven in life is diminishing upon near moments.

Do I have a chance of eternal life of pleasure?

Godspeed dear friend for you are my last.

Spread my message for all others to know of my actions.

Tell them I will suffer a villains fate in Hell's fire.

Tell them they will suffer the same if they don't yield my plea!

For I might have slain dozens of men with my own hands...

But they live like savages in modern times.

I might taste the blood of others on my tongue...

But they slaughter the innocent for their own security.

Surely I won't be alone in the neither.

My neighbors and loved ones will follow.

 So tell them to convert their careless ways!

Or they will burn with me just the same!

For I may have eyes of damnation...

But the devil is the common man.

Author's Note

I haven't been writing for a while but I think I did a decent job on this. Constructive Criticism will always be helpful.

Reviews

[dangerbooze]

Oh my. I can definitely see how religion played a part in writing this. I do find it amusing...reminds me of the Bible Thumpers that come around every once in a while...

[BrynnaW.]

Wow... a very powerful poem. I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!

[Kiari Sabon]

what made u think of this............. i like the write.......... i dont see how this can be of Jesus kenneth in the end the man its about gose to hell.... and in this person they sip the blood of the unholy as there victory drink

[Ruth]

Hell yes! The devil so is in the man not always the religious content! Have to agree.....powerful poem....really goes for it, love it!
xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

I think you basically summed up Jesus's sacrifice in a rather interesting way. Nice work.