Ballerina Exquisite

Ballerina,Ballerina

Had Hopes and Dreams

A "Perfect" Toy Doll

with Broken Seams

 

Ballerina,Ballerina

Anorexia haunted her for the

rest of her life

It hurt so much she

turned to the knife.

 

Ballerina, Ballerina

The cuts were small

Then they got deeper

My Ballerina started to fall

 

Ballerina,Ballerina

Her dance is perfect

No Flaws

But her

Nightmare Monster

Haunts with Claws

 

Ballerina, Ballerina

The shadow It haunts

Will Never leave

It stays to taunt

 

Ballerina,Ballerina

With Fairytale Scars

Who Dances with

Grace

Goes to far.

 

Anorexia Killed Her

Tore Her Apart

Made Her Weak

Then Broke Her Heart

 

Musicbox Melodies

With Flawless Beat

Carries A Tune

She would Never

Meet.

Author's Note

I like this one even tho it's not amazing. What do you think?

Reviews

[Shadow in the Dark]

i like it and after you wrote the part about her cutting herself my wrist started to hurt and still does. Most girls/woman go through that because in todays world there is a image of what woman should look like and if you don't look like that then you are frowned upon and looked down at because your not what they want.

[Josephine Nive]

agree with *butterflykisses*.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

So much emotion, and utterly sad...making the reader feel sorry for this ballerina. touching, heartfelt piece. Nicely done.

~anna rose

[Casper]

Well I thought it was amazing! It is really sad. A common thing for ballerinas under extreme pressure. An eye opener. Beautifully done.

[May]

Ah-Mazing! I really like dis peice:) I mean it its 1 of your bests!

[savine allen aka breezy]

I like

[light and ashes]

I like it too alot. I wrote a poem about a ballerina also. It is melancholly too but very different. Don't underestimate yourself. This is fantastic.

[Dreamer_<3]

i love it it speaks for it self!!

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Great message. I like it.

[LilMissWriter17]

This is really good :)