hypnotic

Hypnotic

                          

A soothing condition your love bestows
I'm captivated under your charming spell
gazing into blazing eyes
victim to a hypnotic trance sublimely strong

Each moment treasured and cherished well
mesmerized by your love surreal
No control,have I, nor want or need
your magic has me hypnotized

Describing my destiny,I'm at your will
with each new dawn, stronger love grows
Residing in your arms,'tis there I belong
disarming my defense to a hypnotic love,I concede. 

 

 

© 2008 Fran Marie

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Fran, I think this is my favorite from you. I agree with every word Caffeine that The unconscious dominates strongly over the conscious, taking us to places and making us do things that the head would have never allowed." My favorite line is this one, though, it was very hard to choose in this piece.
No control,have I, nor want or need
your magic has me hypnotized

Outstanding piece of work, Fran, truly!!!!!!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I'm hypnotized by this lovely poem. Love has a way of entrapping us.

Great Write,
BeautifullyTragic

[Wilding]

I love the sense of letting go in this piece. Of trusting in something you cannot really fathom, but having faith in your destiny. Flows very hypnotically too.

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, I really adored this piece. Love truly has such a way of enrapturing us... completely! Thanks so much to Caffeine for sharing it with me. And thanks so much to you for writing it, Fran.

[SM Davis]

Describing my destiny,I'm at your will
with each new dawn, stronger love grows
Residing in your arms,'tis there I belong
disarming my defense to a hypnotic love,I concede.


What a beautiful demonstration of true poetry! I loved these last lines. Envious even, I might add. :-)

[Imperfection]

Being in love is indeed like being under hypnosis.
The unconscious dominates strongly over the conscious, taking us to places and making us do things that the head would have never allowed.

It feels good to throw caution to the winds, to enjoy the roller-coaster ride....feels like heaven -as long as it lasts, that is.

I usually mention my favorite line in my reviews but in this case, I won't.
I loved the whole poem. Every bit of it.

This piece seems to have hypnotized me.

your magic has me hypnotized

:-)

[Brianna Brie]

soothing condition your love bestows
I'm captivated under your charming spell
gazing into blazing eyes
victim to a hypnotic trance,sublimely strong

Oh yes, I know eyes like that. Really like the combination of words that you use. The font you chose feels personal yet I am still able to read it with ease.