hypnotic

Hypnotic

                          

A soothing condition your love bestows
I'm captivated under your charming spell
gazing into blazing eyes
victim to a hypnotic trance sublimely strong

Each moment treasured and cherished well
mesmerized by your love surreal
No control,have I, nor want or need
your magic has me hypnotized

Describing my destiny,I'm at your will
with each new dawn, stronger love grows
Residing in your arms,'tis there I belong
disarming my defense to a hypnotic love,I concede. 

 

 

© 2008 Fran Marie

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Fran, I think this is my favorite from you. I agree with every word Caffeine that The unconscious dominates strongly over the conscious, taking us to places and making us do things that the head would have never allowed." My favorite line is this one, though, it was very hard to choose in this piece.
No control,have I, nor want or need
your magic has me hypnotized

Outstanding piece of work, Fran, truly!!!!!!

[Cardinal Robin]

It's funny like a lady who doth protest too much, even the hypnosis is created by her fervor...not by her paramour. Beautiful and sensual...

[forfila]

Stunning Fran, just beautiful :)

Love
Me

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Great piece, Fran

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wow! This was simply charming, full of feelings and emotions. I really enjoyed this piece. congrats on your win.

[Celtic Cat]

Ah, nothing better than giving in to the tugging of love. Excellent piece.

[TamiViolet]

Yeah. Isn't it peculiar how certain people......take us under their spell, sometimes without even trying.
Mysterious piece.

[Babe Roxx]

The surrender, isn't always a beautiful thing. Lovely, lovely poem. ~Ev

[Lydia Shutter]

Giving it all up for the one you love...living in a surrealistic fantasy that is actually very real. How beautiful this is, Fran!!!!!!!!!!!! Lydia**

[Becka Marie]

great job...i really love the pic of the eye before the poem...over all it's really beautiful keep up the good work.

[Wolf]

sounds like the true magic of love, and the eyes being the windows to the soul.
The world needs more magic and romance in it.
I like this poem :)