Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[Elvina CZq]

This is just hauntingly and creatively beautiful. You just make me swoon for a moment while I'm reading it. And what makes this poem of yours so alive and passionate, is the font you used. Not many people would do so for a piece of writing, and actually, it is always good to change the font to get the right mood and feels out of the writing.

I enjoyed this very much. It is just nice to be able to read it for the day.

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot a very creative piece... passionate and haunting to me... love the second stanza alot... overall nice job on this ... a very brillant write!

[Georgia Gypsy]

I thouroughly enjoyed reading this!...
great sentiment, and wonderful hope for the romantic in me.;)

[Flo_writer]

Lovely choice of words...I love the flow and the whole feel of the poem.
This poem truly comes from a poetic soul.

[bluessadmood]

Love just how sweet you are ,we tell more and more about you,yet there is lots more to tell
Play with my soul,engage me dear poet,Play the sounds softly with each and every line
Whisper love words to me,make them mine,fill my heart with your ink,i will drink from it
heavenly romance you write,how they gladden my heart,sends my senses soaring high
Always knew love could fly Sing to me and I hear,Tell me taunt me ,take me there
Take my mind with your thoughts,stir my spirits,renew and refine,in poetry paint on me
Those tatoos on my soul with your pen..Oh I will always love to love again
God dear Fran what loveliness..Those words of love just know no end to them
lovely write..

[Mark]

A really fine metaphor , Frannie! I well-crafted poem can tell us more in a minute what lies beneath a person's facade than hours (or indeed, years!) of closer examination can.
A single note, if I may: In the third stanza, 'hear" and "there" do not rhyme. You may wish to substitute "that we may share" in line three for "that I may hear". Just a thought...Otherwise, flawless!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your winning poem

[OceanTropic]

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.


Brilliant lines.

Great poem!

[Mason Vail]

Thank you for sharing this!
An interesting step beyond the usual desire to simply be moved or given something to think about - to be tatooed is to be permanently altered. The best works are those you don't just enjoy for the moment and soon forget. This image will be lasting, I think.

[John A Common]

Just beautiful work. It is flawless.