Red Leaf

Red Leaf

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Haiku

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Red Leaf

Alive with color
Slowly dying like the rest
Without redemption

© 2018 Fran Marie


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AWESOME!! write here, love Haiku's
they have so much impact

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Many thanks Brandie ..much appreciated
I love the power packed haiku. They are elegant and electrifying. Like you they always deliver.

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks Cherrie..for reading..I so appreciate..
Your poof of insight reminded me how melancholy it can be when our brightest moment is just before we fade away *sigh!* Nicely visual & thought-provoking (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks Margie. So much .I always appreciate your kind words..
we can draw some parallels between leaves and people I think.
I think we are our most vibrant in our adult years when we are settled, stable and happiest and then slowly fade away

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

So true..thanks Ana..I so appreciate your reviews on my poetry
Amazing use of words dear Fran. It is sad when the leave turn to red and fade. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Yes ..sad to see the leaves fade away.
.Thanks John..for your kind words..
9much appre.. read more
Ah' but she was noticed amongst all those green and golden ones... and now, the memory of her will live on.... a lovely little write and true.... Neville

Posted 2 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks Neville..I took that picture in my back yard after a heavy rain the other day .and noticed th.. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago

Haiku for the explanation Fran, tis a lovely pic and a fine little oriental themed write... N
leaves do die...but these leaves represent people...when the color fades we become dead brown shells of what we were...and we can only hope our souls will be blown upward toward a good place.
this is concise and yet expands our thinking.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Yes..so vey true..thanks for reading and the kind words.Jacob..ever so appreciate..
Very vividly pictured in my mind. A fate like the rest. Like all of us. Yet think of the beauty it brought to the world!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Years Ago

Yes ..all all things and people inenviably come to an end..Many thanks...i so appreciate your review.. read more

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Added on November 2, 2018
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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