There a tear

drops from your eye~I've
read a thousand more you penned
kissing dark ink dry

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i'm moved to sadness .. well done says i! your senryu is so sensitive in presentation ... voices of poets commune on an ethereal plane .. brought to Earth with paper and ink ... "kissing dark ink dry" is super strong imaging .. such sadness ... :(
E.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear E..
thanks for your
thoughts and words
on my poem..ever so
appreciate it;

[barleygirl]

I love how you equate "tear" and "ink" . . . so concise, so thought-provoking . . . half the poems I read here are written with ink tears (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

thanks Margie..
yes ...each stroke
of the pen carries
our liquid tears as
read morethanks Margie..
yes ...each stroke
of the pen carries
our liquid tears as
we pen our hearts
to paper..your reviews
are much appreciated 😀

[R.E. Ray]

One of my favorite forms, Fran, and you've created a great one here. This poem leaks emotion. Nice work.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Robert..ever
s o much ..i appreciate;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the paradox of the last line....and the entire piece dealing with a poet's tears that are often not falling from the eye, but landing on the paper as the ink drips...
excellent write.'
j.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Jacob
for your kind review
ever s o appreciate ;

[Chris Shaw]

Kissing dark ink dry. Such beautiful poetic expression here Fran Marie. A wonderful piece of brevity which evokes much emotion. Lovely piece.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Chris
for your kind words
on my poetry ☺