Passion's Bedlams

Passion's Bedlams

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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An English Sonnet

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Passion’s Bedlams        by Sami Khalil


An English Sonnet   

           

Aflame, your love torches passion’s bedlams

Tangling up minds that deftly lie awake

Fires and spells, no adept heart jetsams

As though at first glances flailing outbreak.

 

Let me linger in those witchery eyes

Gift me a smile blooming like wildflowers

Tis a shapely model, spellbinding size

Casted divinely by Most High powers.

 

Summon the dreams disentangling the dark

Without mawkish refrain and fledgling brood

For hearts replete with love look stark

Upon roseate dawns, laughter imbued.

 

Aflame, your love torches shadow’s bedlams

Sending shivers like shooting stars’ mayhems.         

 

© 2021 Sami Khalil


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Whew... your command of language is on full display here! "Let me linger in those witchey eyes," was an intense line with perfect placement. Great write!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Days Ago

Whoaaa! Thank you so much Travis Gibson for this lovely review and visit. Hope all is well in your w.. read more
When I left here 4 months ago, your listing was all stories. Now it appears to be all poems. And SONNETS! I can't believe you've gotten into sonnets to such a degree. What I hate about sonnets are those stiff uppity Elizabethan-sounding affairs that rehash the same romantic language over & over. BORING! That's where I learned to hate sonnets. But your sonnet is nothing like that. No way! Your language is dynamic & natural-sounding, but also with that unique Sami flair for artistry! (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

Wow! Coming from you is an honor indeed. You put a big smile on faces and warmth in hearts. All glad.. read more
barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

You're killing me, luv!
dearest Sami... I am drawn to Sonnets...
across the sky where flowers fly... I will not ask Why...
I float in your dreams of Butterflies and see the Beauty in your Eyes...
tenderly, Pat

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

Wow! So beautiful and so enchanting. You sure are talented. Thank you so much dear Patricia Wedel fo.. read more
“ Summon the dreams disentangling the dark
Without mawkish refrain and fledgling brood
For hearts replete with love look stark
Upon roseate dawns, laughter imbued.”
Uncanny magic in just a few lines, the entire poem is just so ethereal and beautifully written. Everything about each phrase hits with a thick sense of nostalgia. Absolutely wonderful!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Weeks Ago

Whoa! Thank you so much dear poet for this highly appreciated review. Hope all is well in your world.. read more
wonderful description - all true and so powerful. such a strong emotion and descriptive words - hard to be contained. emotional and touching as was intended ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Whoeeee! An honor and a great validation coming from a very talented poet. Million thanks sir Pete. .. read more
Shooting across the sky.....romance! Your use of Olde English makes me think...which is never a bad thing. It is true....love and passion can cause bedlam! Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Hehehe! So true and well said. I like the way you summed it all up. Thank you so much Lydia...
Wow sent me back in time, dreamy, loved! Thank you!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

So glad to know that. An honor to have you visit and share. Keep up your work so we can read them...
Alexcat

1 Month Ago

Oh you're a beautiful soul, thank you and will do!
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

:::::))))))))))))))))))
Bedlams and shivers , word choice divine , a sonnet to make Shakespeare proud.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Whoaaa! So good to see you Moon. Hope all is well. Thank you so much for all. You make us proud too... read more
Amazing those 'shivers' Sami.... and like a shooting star, your poem leaves a trail to the heart.... nice to read you again my friend...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Whoeee! I love you summation and your poetic voice. You are one of the most talented on this site. M.. read more
I love the poem Sami.
"Let me linger in those witchery eyes
Gift me a smile blooming like wildflowers
Tis a shapely model, spellbinding size
Casted divinely by Most High powers."
I liked the above lines. Great use of description my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Whoaaa! Thank you so much Coyote for this wonderful review and lovely visit. All appreciated...
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Hello my friend and you are welcome.
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

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