Snowfall

        certain excitement

fills frosty air flakes flying  

    a snow covered ground

Reviews

[Ada]

Nice haiku you have written here.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Ada
so very much😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wonder if they are more excited to fly and fall, or to lie on the ground once they arrive.
j.

[Fran Marie]

I would imagine they like
flying best..thanks Jacob😊

[Throwing Romeo]

Ooh I like this!!
Lovely poem

[Fran Marie]

Thank you for reading😊

[Unspoken poet]

wonderful haiku, i saw some snow flakes earlier today. It is only about 10 degrees here today where I live. so cold

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran … your poem is Perfect. We had an extraordinary Snow fall of about twelve inches of light fluffy ⛄️ Snow.. it created it’s own sculptures. At seven AM huge gorgeous snowflakes the likes I have never seen… fell from Heaven… we were Snowbound for a day or so…. Now thank goodness we did not have more Snow so far. Wishing you a glorious Winter .. gently, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat..yes snowed yesterday
in Paris Kentucky..about 7 to 8 inches
was excited to see the flakes fall..
just like a big old kid lol.i was
entranced by its beauty..happy
winter time to you as well😊

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

You captured that moment in my youth when I saw snow falling for the very first time. It was absolutely magical to my child eyes.

[Fran Marie]

Snow is indeed magical .
I must be crazy but I love it
we got snow yesterday
about 7 to 8 inches...glad
you could relate ..thanks
for reading Carlos