A Paper Heart

 

I write my heart on paper 'tis thinner than autumn leaves and these tears I cannot taper to put my mind at ease my delicate heart surrendered for a true love I wanted to share showing emotions tendered proving how much I cared I write my spirit to the winds and tho~the ink has dried my soul sealed in sadness descends for this paper heart has died

Reviews

[Chilson, Joshua]

I truly love this poem, there isn't much I can say and nothing bad that come's to mind. Great job.

[Trilby]

I'm not sure about the word 'tis in the first stanza, it doesn't seem to gel, maybe? But the third stanza is genuinely beautiful. Seriously. Wow.

[Lydia Blackwell]

this is completely lovely. great job with the prose. It is done in a classical style but I think holds more emotion than the classics, even.

[Omar]

Oh so melancholic... But lovely. It's tender and light but piercing in its final and firm tone... Great job :)

[Laura Nikkinen]

That was amazing, first and last stanza very enjoyable.

[Adela Muresan]

The tragism of opening your heart and having it wounded is expressed in very ,,delicate,, terms.
I like it :) .

A.M.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A really deeply touching write, the first stanza is amazing in itself. Wonderfully done.

[samaveiled]

thats gorgeous. nice write! 'my soul sealed in sadness descends' that is art. beautiful.