`Equilibrium`

`Equilibrium`

A Poem by Fran Marie
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love

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You!

Throw me off
ballance, losing
all sense of equilibrium.
I tremble and lose control.
Yet, this unshakable faith I
have, confirms our love was
meant to be.

You!

Turn me on, completely
Im in a dazed
so dizzy,it renders me
senseless,and captive
of your loving power.


You!

Make me crumble like
a fragile cookie.
gingerly snapped~into
sugary love-bites,
I become your's, all your's.


You!

taste my desire
my hunger for your love
I chase you 'til you catch me
free falling, willingly into your arms


'Tonight you are mine,

© 2009 Fran Marie


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Fran, this is sensual with wondrous images. Especially enjoyed the last line:

'Tonight you are mine'

Suggests getting lost in the moment....accepting it for what it is...without empty promises...



Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely style, quite unique with the format as well. Love the immagry and emotions. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

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