Harmony

Ameriku Form

 
Winter birds

 

      sing in harmony

 

 springtime's notes

 

        the soul listens

Reviews

[Devons]

At first glance the eyes send a signal to the brain which translates: "Is this all?"
But then the brain begins to interpret the signal with less superficial cognisance.
The words connect the soul of nature with the soul of Man. It reminds Man that there will one day again be better seasons to come, reassuring and giving hope through the recognition birdsong conveys.
A little more than meets the eye. A sort of maxim. Interesting how much commonplace nature all around us truly represents. And interesting how I have managed to write more words about the poem than what of the poem itself consists.

[nostal]

Enlightening.
the animation suits the poem very well, adding another layer of vibrancy.

[vindictivesunshine]

The essence of poem brings serenity, and says so much more than its four lines.

Great piece.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I too wish for the song birds of spring
Tate

[funeralmoon]

I like it short and sweet and a taste of spring
good job.

[An owl on the moon]

The words bring such peace and your imagery is magical! So filled with a sense of hope... what lies ahead. Loved this!

[Star Wolf]

Very nice. It creates a pleasant picture, for sure.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very cool piece ... kind of thought provoking.... love the ending...a very impressive piece!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Pure magic in those few words... I love the sounds of spring approaching.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Thank you. I try to listen.
Coyote