Thank you!

This is for the love of my life, the picture should tell you who lol but ill just tell you, its roxast

Once I was covered in darkness, these Needles’s pressed against my back

I had sunk so low that I even lost despair

I could not take it anymore living my life every day in such pain and misery

How on earth can anyone live this way?

All I wanted was for someone to take me in their arms so that they could comfort me

So I could finally let out these emotions that were locked deep down inside me

Then I realized that I was a fool for ever trying

That there was no point to it all

Then form a distance you called out to me

Why must you do this to yourself?

Then you took a hold of my hand and more importantly my heart

You brought me out the darkness and into the light

It’s all thanks to you that I am alive here

Without you life would mean nothing

I want to thank you for being a part of my life

 

Author's Note

also this was based of a song that i love, but dont even try to sing along or make a conection to the lryics lol my mind works strangly like that XD and notice the t in the picture above

Reviews

[CecilA]

GDM,

It sounds as though you are close to being finished with these three chapters; other than a couple of words I recommend that you check out. A quick reading aloud will alert you to them. But don't beat it to death or it will loose it's originality.

What are your plans for the future of this work? I look forward to what you have in store for us.

I like that you added 'You asked.' instead of 'You said.' It seems more heart felt which suits your theme in this letter.

Thank you for letting me be a true friend.

Sincerely,

Cecil

[Timeless-Chan]

Very deep:) I like it! very good job! Keep up the hard work!
~Dreamer!

[Rika]

thank you!

[Zeph]

From sadness to happiness, love it. Keep it up!

[Rika]

i will!!! thankyou!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Good to be thankful for someone who is good to you in your life. I like the positive feel of the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rika]

Thanks!