Fallen Angel

I’m sorry my dear beloved but I have fallen.
So far not within anyones reach not even yours.
But you try any way, why is that?
Why do you try to reach someone so steeped in darkness?
Who has done so many horrible things.
Horrible things that have affected you and the people around me.
Things that no one would  forgive me for.
Things that I will never forget.
I just don’t understand why you try.
I don’t understand why anyone would try.
I try because you said I’m sorry the person answered.

Reviews

[Imagine Blade]

Ooooohhh... Interesting. This is just too sweet.

It's like everlasting love that the other person just loves this guy no matter what, even if he DID step into the darkness. I love personas like this and it's a fact that the most beautiful stories come from loving someone who has been to the dark side but still keeps a compassionate heart.

That picture you have, I have that as my wallpaper from 4 years ago.^^

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Reminds me of Beauty and the Beast for some reason. Lol Still though, great poem :D It was lovely!

[Rika]

I guss your right lol, thanks!

[Poison Ivy]

very well done!

[Rika]

Glad you liked it!

[Bluefire]

Truly wonderful :3

[Steven Cash]

Wow this is powerful

For truly

[Ella]

"I'm sorry my dear beloved(,) but I have fallen."
"So far not within anyone’s reach not even yours"
Anyways, awh! I love this! It is so sad and beautiful at the same time. My favourite poem of all time, including famous pieces.

[Rika]

Realy???? Thanks!!!!!

[Ella]

Yes really! Welcome :)

[Bluefire]

Sorry to but in, hate to sound like a know-it-all, but wouldn't "anyone's" be a combonation of "anyone is"?
Like its and it's
"It's" with the apostrophe is a combonation of "it is"
whereas "Its" is just "its"
just thought I'd help a little.

[Ella]

True, maybe... I don't know. I put it in a word document thinking the same thing, but it didn't tell me I was wrong.

[Bluefire]

Maybe I should just mind my own business lol sorry. ^^

[Ella]

Lol, no it's fine. I am so bad at spelling in grammar xD

[Bluefire]

LOL so am I. I was just repeating what my teacher told me xD

[Ella]

Lol, my teachers tell me a lot so I don't always remember what they say...

[deepblue04]

this tragic but a good poem!

[RachelReaper]

This is so tragically beautiful that this person won't give up on you or the love they have for you, its so special and sweet that you would write this.

[Irvette Dauphine]

i can feel the emotional..
and i like it..
great job.. :)

[Freedom's Child]

Great emotion, it is sorrow the entire way until the last line where there is a glimpse happiness with the sorrow still present. I like the connection with the first and last line "sorry". Good work

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

So emotional and amazing. I loved this poem. It has a great flow of thoughts.
Magnificent job!
100/100