light of an angel

Your presence allures me
It also ensures me
That I'll be protected
Never neglected
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
I wait patiently
Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become

Reviews

[The dark story]

"That ill be protected" ...i don't know but may be i am wrong ....but i think that there should be "will"........
Your wings glow white
All through the night
As you fly gracefully
i liked the way you have described an angel...really a damn good imagination....

[The Invisible Girl]

I love it!! :D 100/100

[Rika]

Thank you very much!

[Poison Ivy]

what a lovely piece! < 3

[Rika]

Thanks!

[✖Lust✖]

It's ....... beautiful -crys a little-

[Rika]

Well its to cry a little sometimes.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

It's short but you ended this poem perfectly.
"Because I know you will come
No matter what I have become"
These two lines knocked the breath out of me. Beautiful.

[Bluefire]

Very lovely, well drafted.

[Ella]

Oh my gosh, I love it all! It's so beautiful! An amazing poem! Short and sweet :)

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*twinkly eyes* THAT'S SO PRETTY! *re-reads it again* Mhmmmmm like the sugar to my coffee :P nah! don't drink coffee either way Wicked job :D

[Rika]

Thanks! :3

[Steven Cash]

Very nice, esp the ending