Before I'ts Too Late

                   

                                               Before It's Too Late

Rise up, O' dear, and get above hate,

Embrace close ones, before it's too late.

Get drenched in compassion , the shower great,

Bid farewell to ego, before it's too late.

Make efforts and revive, the kindness innate,

Learn to forgive, before it's too late.

To savor contentment and soulfully celebrate,

Take to  humility, before it's too late.

Create memories of moments, that you'll commemorate,

Kill the potential remorse, before it's too late.

Value the 'voice' within, what it does state,

And let feelings blossom forth, before it's too late.

For the ultimate joy, don't give in to fate,

Realize your 'self', before it's too late.

Reviews

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

This. Is. VERY. Good. “Good” as in good/evil, and “good” because it is well-written enough to communicate your message perfectly loudly and clear! Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"For the ultimate joy, don't give in to fate,
Realize your 'self', before it's too late."
We must know laughter and pleasure. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[June Fowler]

I like your thoughts.

Create memories of moments, that you'll commemorate,
Kill the potential remorse, before it's too late.

Lovely lines.These hold a lot of meaning and is something very hard to do when you have been hurt by dear and near ones. Very hard to kill the potential remorse, but its better done than never coz it will help one to live in peace with ones self as well as others.

[G!o]

Rhyming a poem is easy but mastering the art of rhyming and making a good damn sense out of a poem is on another level of beauty and that's the level you've put this in. Beautiful write Gurdeep.

[Dayran]

Like a comment to a best friend that we have known all our life. The concerns shares itself with the fate of both.

[anne]

wonderful, gurdeep, so true and a beautiful remind...:))

[DoormanDan]

This poem gives a message that the world really needs to hear more often in my opinion. We don't know when everything around us will end, so we have to make sure we spend every moment living our lives the correct way, and make sure we don't ignore our friends and family. I really like the title, and repeating it throughout the poem is very effective in packing more of a punch with this poem. Great job! :)