Reflections

Reflections

A Poem by G.W. Saitreux
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steal this poem

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The hours,
the minutes,
the seconds,

You better look away,
look away from this
futile, old scene

Don't you know you
oughta turn toward,
oh won't you come, 
come face me: see green

The hours,
the minutes,
the seconds

Bleeding out
from under us
through each night's
acquired drought

Why do you think about?

The hours,
the minutes,
the seconds,

Your life,
your love,
your loss,

You cannot save
Yourself, a slave:

The hours,
the minutes,
the seconds

What will you do?
- G.W. Saitreux

© 2018 G.W. Saitreux


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G.W. Saitreux
Any and all feedback welcome(:
Especially the mean stuff!

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This pice of writing really connects to me right now and my thoughts and how I handling things. Simple but true.

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G.W. Saitreux

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review! I'm glad to connect you to your present moment as that was my intent with thi.. read more
Very catchy and well written, you get to thinking about where you spend your time and what’s it all about -worth it or not, enjoyed it 🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
intriguing write, I liked this write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

G.W. Saitreux

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it(:

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Added on February 13, 2018
Last Updated on February 16, 2018
Tags: poem, time, love, life, hours, minutes, seconds

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Gabriele Weiss-Saitreux



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