Pearl Beneath the Sea

Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

She is a Diamond in the rasp a Treasure in the sea

The music in the Oceans Waves.

Where love flutters like a breeze On a Summer Mornings Day

where Gulls sing to the wisp of the wind.

Where love takes her, she sails within a spin upon

the currents of her heart

hypnotized by the Crystal Opel Reflection of

shells that Shine in deep Blue waters.

She's cut from fine stones, and never sinks to be.

 Love Plays the harp strings

of her heart as she dances with the shadows of the lovely sunsets

smiles.

 Magical Whispers of the seas Reefs

singing Moonlit colors glowing upon her Golden Locks of Curls.

She produces a flow of the maidens inn where love and grace become

within reaching the bottom of pearl delight her shine as moonlight

She settles of my day beyond the dark of seas,

brings me this delight of her ocean breeze

Reflection of Her

blue eyes look back at you running Upon sand Castles washed

away from the salty

waters lets find our dreams in a carefree

place without any worries.

Illuminated Beauty roars from

beneath the whisper of the tangible

beams of light that  is reveled from the reefs

of the  deep blue ripples of waves.

Collaboration done by Benita Staebell McCartney &

Jonathan Edward Furches

Author's Note

Collaboration done with Jonathan Edward Furches. written July 22. 2014

Reviews

[just Penny]

I like the clear descriptions here and how they offer a feeling of something being precious. To "sail within a spin upon the currents of her heart" has a light free tone. Pearls are amazing and beautiful. I think you two captured that really well in your writing. Congrats to both of you. Penny

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Bright Ocean Star]

A new favorite, Kindred poetess. Thank you as well, Jonathon Edward Furches. I really enjoyed this. I could almost hear the mermaid song in the summer island's beach breeze. Great writing. Thank you.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. The poem is amazing. The description took me to beautiful places and thoughts. You two did a outstanding job. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Frieda P]

Beautiful work you two...not sure about the word 'rasp' used here, but I understood what you meant. Love the imagery of the sea....


hypnotized by the Crystal 'Opal' Reflection of
shells that Shine in deep Blue waters.

Nicely pen'd collaboration.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

What a beautiful collaboration. Well done to both of you.
Always a beautiful romantic write when I visit. : )

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Anytime my friend. :)

[Christopher Robin]

A delightfully distinguished piece of prose.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Pryde Foltz]

Another really beautiful piece. Loved it:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

A wonderful collaboration and mesmerising work! The imagery is soothing and fluid, most calmingly beautiful poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

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Wow Sis you finished it up amazing:)))))))))))))))) I love it:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

ah well I didn't write this alone so take a bow brother your welcome and thank you. I appreciate it. thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

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Smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssss:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a magical collaborations filled with exotic bliss… bravo you two for united to make this super poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done, guys...sounds like one.

love the beauty of the sea expressed here...somewhat reminds me of shawn Colvin's song "diamond in the rough"

even in the harshest waves, there is beauty...salty dreams, tasty...love in tangible waters.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Jon thanks you as well we both do we appreciate it. we both thank you for your kind review and comments. glad you Enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet