I love you baby.

Every time I think about you my heart pounds
I know it sounds crazy
But it is true
I love you
I'll love you till the end
My heart is yours to mend
The first text I get from you every day gives me butterflies
I have been fed so many lies
I love you with all my heart
I hope that you do not rip it apart
You're not my ex, I know
But some things you say remind me of him, and it does show
I would like to see you before I go insane
I want to see you so badly that it almost cripples me with pain
But until then I say "I love you"
And for now, that will have to do

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Jamie,

Another write showing desparate love and need for another. This seems central to your passions, here, a deep desire to be an object of love.

"The first text I get from you every day gives me butterflies
I have been fed so many lies"

But fear of rejection is intermixed:

"I love you with all my heart
I hope that you do not rip it apart"

Your writing is clear, and there is no mistake about your passions and your needs. Well written.

Best regards,

Rick

[Sexy P3nguin]

I really like this piece. It has the classic teen love feel to it and I'm sure we have all been through this once or twice, I love the way you wrote the following lines:
"I would like to see you before I go insane
I want to see you so badly that it almost cripples me with pain
But until then I say "I love you"
And for now, that will have to do"

Amazing job.
-Dustin xoxo

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, yea, indeed, those are 3 very powerful words to tell someone u care for so much. It's like a bond that should never be broken, and 'tis a committment, those words. Great flow to this piece as well. Great job :)

B.A.

[Cassandra D.]

Wow.
This was very cool.
I enjoyed reading this.

[Domo]

This was a sweet write. Good job on this one, it really rings in the heart for me. Keep it up Jamie! ☺
~D♥m♥~

[Twilight]

This rhymes and flows rather smoothly, Jamie! It certainly deserves some more reviews (and praise!). Quite romantic, emotional, and a true pleasure to read. Thankyou...