A Poem by Green



I tell my story

the way I wish someone else

would hear it

Clouded and cloaked

in my point of view

Hoping that one day, someone

will pick it up

and read it objectively

And try to find the 

symbolism and themes

I never intended

And think about how

they would rewrite its ending

if they were the author

© 2021 Green

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Sounds like you are thinking of a collaboration here. Ive done those a few times and they can work if there is dedication and cooperation on both sides. Two heads can be better as the saying goes...

Posted 6 Months Ago

' .. try to find the ~ symbolism and themes ~ I never intended.. '

So like the way you've set your thoughts, how you've put your words and 'maybe' intentions yet, would be content to have another's view point breach your defences! Seems you have the ability to be yourself yet acknowledge others creative slants. That is a great ability for a writer ~ could be called t elastic imagery!

Posted 9 Months Ago

our stories end often not how we intended...but imagine if someone else could ghost write for us, and give us a happier ending than we could ever write.

Posted 9 Months Ago

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Added on February 20, 2021
Last Updated on February 20, 2021



Dublin, GA

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