Sky's on fire

Sky's on fire

A Poem by Green
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I need a better title...

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Don’t look now

But the sky’s on fire

I didn’t know things burned in shades of pink

Peeks of blue In between the lazy flares

I thought that was supposed to be

The hottest part of the flame

Fully formed day clouds

Drifting away like the smoke

Don’t look now

But the world's alight

© 2021 Green


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it will be the way the world is going. this was different taking me away into a flamed reality ... :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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This very much the case as the sun sets becoming intermittently hidden behind the last of the days clouds.
Very descriptive, can't help you with the title though :)

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Green
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Dublin, GA



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I'm 24 and living in the good ol' south of the US of A. Professionally, I'm an engineer and I guess that means I'm supposed to know things. I don't always. I write because I can, and because I can wri.. more..

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