Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Green
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It's a moment
Completely missed by everyone
When she slows down
Looks up at the sky
Exhales a puff of visible air
And smiles

© 2022 Green


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Simple, strong and wonderful use of words. You gave life to the photo. It is good to take a puff of the visible air. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago
Dear Kindred poet
Uttering the sigh in words
immortalize the breath
we share.

Well done.
100/100


Posted 1 Year Ago
Sounds like a beautiful moment, sometimes in this life it is hard to just breathe. Beautiful simple write which I can relate to ;-]

Posted 1 Year Ago
Love this, love the imagery. awesome

Posted 2 Years Ago
I love it! it's short but is so peaceful to read!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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 Added on January 19, 2022
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