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"The Reason"

"The Reason"

A Poem by Gregory Lara

The reason I decided to love again 
Why I opened my heart
Why I felt like a kid who had his first crush 

The reason I wake with a smile every morning
Why I have joy so unimaginable 
Why i pass all other girls paying no mind to them

The reason I put my past behind me
Why I changed 
Why i feel again 

The reason is simple really
The reason is you..

© 2010 Gregory Lara


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Very powerful & yet simply written. There's a sense of suspense thru-out as we wait to find out the reason, even tho we kinda know what it's gonna be. You've done a great job of conveying a sense of courage, too, in stepping out beyond a heartache. Nice read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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dan
Gregory, That is a very nicely formatted and well written piece. Through the write you keep asking 'why' and that leads it nicely to clever and tender finish. Well done! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


The poem is beautiful. Great description of affection and desire for a woman. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its like enjoyment to my eyes. :))

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Gregory Lara
Gregory Lara

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