From Me To You

From Me To You

A Poem by Silent Angel
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A kinda Emo-poem i wrote for my friend Tyler...yeah, it's really dramatic.

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Seconds tick away the day…
Inch by inch…you fade away

Tell me now and tell me true…

What happened to the you I knew?

Was it her, or was it me?

I never meant to make you leave…

Your silence haunts my thoughts each day…

Side ways glances…but you move away…

Your smile has faded…

The light is gone…

Was it me you hated?

I did you wrong…

Things I can’t repair…

All I do is stare…

Quiet and alone…

As you walk towards home…

Your laughter echoes in my mind…

I search your eyes…but I can never find

The sparkle that used to linger there…

I wish I could touch you, to smooth your hair…

To tell you I’d always be by your side…

But this is just a rollercoaster ride…

We don’t talk anymore…

There’s no knock on the door…

Cries fall upon deaf ears…

No one there to calm the fears…

Tell me now and tell me true…

Will you be the you I knew?

 

© 2008 Silent Angel


Author's Note

Silent Angel
It's kinda silly, but yeah.

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its good.. why do you think its silly

Posted 16 Years Ago


I don't think it is silly at all. It has a lot of emotion in it and if you want to call that emo, then be my guest; it's your work.


Posted 16 Years Ago


I understand this, and can empathize in my own small way. Very well done; I liked the change in phrase length, it emphasized the bewilderment you must have felt.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i really like this its not silly at all i felt this way when i had lost my exhusband there is good writing here ty for sharing it great wrie girl keep it up

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Silent Angel
Silent Angel

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