Easy Mathmatics

Easy Mathmatics

A Poem by Hamkar
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A poem/story I wrote that used the words fireworks, rage, bonded, desire, and destruction

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Stick + Stick = Sticks

Sticks + Rubbing = Friction

Friction = The reaction from the desire for something that one can’t have because of someone else

Friction + Sticks = Fire

Fire + Work = Firework

Firework + Firework = Fireworks

Fireworks = Fuse

Fuse + Fire = BANG

BANG = Loud popping noise

BANG = The sound of Fireworks

BANG = The result when Fuse and Fire Bonded

BANG = Onomatopoeia

...

Silence

...

No BANG = Finished

No BANG = Leftovers

No People = Finished

No People = Leftovers still there

Leftover still there = Rage

Leftovers + Sticks + Rubbing + Friction = Fire

Fire + Trees + Bushes + Forest = Forest Fire

Forest Fire = Long time

Forest Fire = Danger

Forest Fire = Blazing Trees and Bushes

Forest Fire = Dead Animals

Forest Fire = Destruction

Forest Fire = Carelessness

Forest Fire = Sadness

Forest Fire = Shameful

Forest Fire = The result of Stick + Stick

© 2010 Hamkar


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Hamkar
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I really like it, the form is interesting and unique. I thought of it as both a story and a poem. I really enjoyed this.

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It's a poem, and a story. It's like nothing I've ever read before, which makes it true poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this was definitely interesting. Um, I think it's like a story in a poem. I like those. :) I love how you focus a lot on forest fires and also focus on how everything connects together. Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the creative form of this poem and I love this poem. thanks for posting this in creative poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Definitely intrigued by the form and insightful flow of this poem. It communicates ideas and notions in a very unique way. Loved this read!

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Hamkar
Hamkar

Nelson, New Zealand



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