Hi Anahat. This really touched my heart. I love how you reminisce through the things in life that matter most. I could feel your appreciation for a wonderful childhood, and I envy you that. Just a beautifully simplistic write that tells it like it was. A delight to read this wonderfully penned poem, alf
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9 Years Ago
Thank you alf for such a wonderful review...
Really glad that you loved it..
Thank you.. read moreThank you alf for such a wonderful review...
Really glad that you loved it..
Thank you for reading :)
I agree.
"Lived a carefree life, about problems didn't have to think much.
That time Dad was the only hero and Mom the only best friend,
Rightly said, everyone dies twice, once when their Childhood ends!"
The days of youth. Carefree days of childhood dreams. When forgotten. We become old. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Lost in my time
With this rhyme
it does chime
which make me tell this is a dime
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9 Years Ago
whats dime? N thank you as I can see you can connect to it :)
9 Years Ago
Dime originally means tenth of a dollar... A coin... But in informal way you could use it to refer s.. read moreDime originally means tenth of a dollar... A coin... But in informal way you could use it to refer something attractive
I am Anahat, that's the pen name for Harmeet.
I believe poetry is but altruism muffled up in eternity.
I joined this platform long back but haven't been active. Now I'm back and hope to connect .. more..