I'm Not Done With It.

This is about how I tried so hard to let out my love for the guy I love, and he doesn't acknowledge it. But I won't give up, until he finally sees it.

I have told you over and over again.

For you not to hear me, is quite aggravating.

You still treated me the same, after I talked to you.

I wanted more from you and all I got was just a simple hug.

It meant a lot to me, but I wanted more, but I never got it.

I don’t think I keep going like this.

But Hope never gives up, so I won’t give up on you.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

Line 6. Perhaps you meant "I don't think I can keep going going like this." Perserverence will hopefully bring you reward and the person you seek shall recpirocate the feelings. Anyway I enjoyed the read!

[Heartful5160]

Thank you for reading it. I hope you get to read more of my work! Just know to not to ever give up on love!

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol sometimes easier said than done when it comes to love but one can certainly try and you're welcome :)

[Heartful5160]

I can tell you I'm with you on that. If you want something so much, I don't think that you should give up on it. Never!

[Chaos_Collector]

But if you realize that you're hurting chasing after it and what you're after will probably never be yours than it may be time to reconsider your options.

[Heartful5160]

Exactly, but we'll know when that moment is.

[Chaos_Collector]

Yup, you're right about that.

[Blank_fortunes]

Real sweet but trust me when I say If they got away it's because something better is coming and theres not enough room in your life for the extra. hope that makes since to you.

[Heartful5160]

It makes complete since. People always wonder why you have to let go the ones you love, for a reason, is because of what you said. It's true, you can't have extra. Actually if you think about it, some people do the extra, and I believe that's not how you're supposed to live life. Thanks for reading and thanks for the review!

[Blank_fortunes]

not a problem don't let your ink dry up Keep writing

[Heartful5160]

Thank you. I have no doubt that my ink won't dry up. It won't dry up, until I die, because my whole life is a story just waiting to be told.

[TheLostMind]

I love the way you end this poem."But Hope never gives up, so I won’t give up on you.". In life you should hang on to things that really matter... If we give up, it means that those things weren't important... A good write :)

[Heartful5160]

Thank you, but the reason I said that is because my name is Hope and I was saying that I don't give up.

[TheLostMind]

Lol... The capital H :).. I thought you wanted to say something else :p

[Heartful5160]

I don't understand.

[TheLostMind]

I thought you wanted to say - "but I will never give up hope" .. I thought you had a typo there

[Heartful5160]

Nope. I try to read my work before I send it in to share with others.

[TheLostMind]

Edited the review a little.. Sometimes people submit poems / stories by typing them on their phones. The probability of finding typos in such cases is more. So, I focus more on emotion than the structure of the sentence :)

[Heartful5160]

Well, I still thank you for the review.

[TheLostMind]

Well, you are welcome :P

[Heartful5160]

you should check out my newest stories, I've put up. Called Being Secure with my Insecurity and It Was Just A Dream

[TheLostMind]

Sure. . :)