The Woman

This is about how woman aren't just another person. Just another human being. It's about how we mean something and how much we mean.

We are one, but there are many of us.
There are times we go weak & loose trust.
Were way better than any man.
We'll show you were we stand.
We bring beauty to the world.
We have times where we feel like a little girl.
We can be more than a mom.
There are times we go wrong.
No man will knock us down.
We will always come back around.
We take care of our responsibilities.
Our worlds are filled with possibilities.
"I love you" means so much to us.
Sometimes we wanna hug just cause.
For days & years we've been knowin'.
Because we are the powerful woman!

Reviews

[Will]

I really love the message of this poem. The short, choppy lines add to the impact of the words. Well done. As a side note, little grammar and spelling things to keep in mind (as I am obsessed with that kind of thing):
In line 2, "loose" should be "lose". The way I remember it is as a sentence like this: "If you have a loose wallet, you're gonna lose your money".
In line 3, "were" should be "we're"
Beyond that, as I said before, this is an excellent poem.

[Heartful5160]

Thank you for the pointers and thanks for checking out my work. I don't blame you about picking out the grammar and spelling, because I read a lot of work like that. We just get excited about writing and we just miss those errors, but thank you.Check out the rest of my work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Without woman. Men would not know calm or peace. Women are the teacher of the children and the holder of the love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem for the women.
Coyote

[Heartful5160]

Thank you once again for reading and reviewing this piece. I totally agree.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I liked your poetry.

[Heartful5160]

Thank you know I'll be sure to check out your work.

[Gee]

Sometimes we wanna hug 'cause. That doesn't mean an open invite to grope,grab,and prepare for a game of hide the sausage.It's just a hug.My wife has told me this on many an occasion.Really enjoyed reading this.

[Heartful5160]

Haha. As a girl sometimes all we want is a hug and it feels good to be held in a guys arms. It makes us feel safe and for me, and I don't know about any other girls out there, but it makes us feel like nothing in the world is bad and we have nothing to worry about. But, next time if your wife comes up to you and just wants an easy hug, give it to her, because you never know what she might be feeling at the point or what she's thinking. It just feels so good to just get a easy hug. You could possibly make her day!

[Gee]

Consigned to the memory.Thanks

[Heartful5160]

Your welcome!

[MsJewel]

Your words are uplifting and inspiring. I like the strength here - very nice!

:) Julie

[Heartful5160]

Thanks for the review. It's hard smashing all your feelings all into one little poem. But I try my best. We are woman and we go through a lot and there's just so much to experience and so much to write about!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Good one... Little girl, Mom, Powerful woman... you described every aspect of being a woman beautifully....

[Heartful5160]

Thank you. I'm not a little girl, I'm a powerful young woman and one day I hope to be a mom. LOL. Us, woman are more than anyone can think of. I would love for a man to change places with a woman for just one day and see how easy their lives really are.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Roles have been assigned according to ones ability ....Male or female both have their strong points and weaknesses...its our society that differentiates....No one is less than other...

[Heartful5160]

I totally agree, but I see some guys try to think that they're better than woman not caring that God have given them separate roles and they need to stop competing on what they can do. I believe that God made us to have different inputs on the world so that we could have our differences or it wouldn't be called life.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

yes... so true...when one tires to be superior to other..the gender bias arises....

[Heartful5160]

yes, they do. Glad were on the same page!

[Katie]

Your words inspire ! I absolutely love the poem !:)

[Heartful5160]

Your review is taken to heart. Thank you very much

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Great and powerful write! Women are strong and sometimes stronger than men...depending on the situation. I enjoyed the write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Heartful5160]

Thank you. I love writing about how we can overcome the men. Some men believe that they're stronger than us, but really I believe that we are. Honestly, we go through more than they do. But were all humans and we all do matter.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Yeah, that is very true. Everyone goes through hurt and pain!

[Heartful5160]

100% true!