Life's Not Fair!

Life's Not Fair!

A Poem by Heartful5160
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This piece is about how I could complain about how my life isn't fair, but at least I have a life that I'm living.

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Life's Not Fair

I don't like the house I'm living in, it's not fair!
I don't like the food that's on my plate, it's not fair!
I don't like the clothes I'm wearing, it's not fair!
I don't like the kind of parents I have, their too strict, it's not fair!

Why not be grateful that I have a roof over my head, while others are struggling
to find a home? I think it's quite fair.
Why not enjoy the food that's on my plate and eat it, while there are kids without
food to eat? I think it's quite fair.
Why not be grateful that I have clothes to put on my body when it's cold or hot? I
think it's quite fair.
Why not be glad that I have parents that will look out for the best of me and even though there strict, while other kids may not have parents that love them as hard
mine do? I think that's quite fair.

© 2015 Heartful5160


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Great message, so true! Need to be thankful for God's blessings, so many without, thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
I agree. We must not look at what others have. We must be happy for whatever God has given us. Life is never fair, we have to accept it and move on. A really good write :).

PS : I think there is a "typo" here --> "even though there strict," should be "they are" :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Probably is a typo. I mean I did this in a rush, but thank you for reading it and reviewing.
TheLostMind

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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I'm a sixteen year old hard working writer and I enjoy writing every second. I love to give my opinion on things. I've written about three novels and trying to get them published. Please, if you have .. more..

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