Moon and sun.

Moon and sun.

A Poem by Heather

"When the moon and the sun switch place, for you my heart will no longer race."

© 2012 Heather

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It's beautiful, but if they switch places, we will literally fall off the Earth and be sucked into the gravitational pull of the sun!! Ouch... : ) Everyone will melt into one gooey person. xoxo -Mark

Posted 7 Years Ago

So short, yet so beautiful. Amazing job. I think it'd be a great idea to go further with this and extend it. Either way, lovely idea and lovely poem. (:

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago

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This is a nice poem. Well penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago

terrific line, loved it

nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

That is elegance in a beautiful verse!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on May 3, 2012
Last Updated on May 3, 2012



SlitsOurWrists., NC

Hello there my name is Heather. I am 25 years old, my birthday is on August the first 1990. :) I don't judge people. I'll accept anyone and everyone. I will write any type of story for anyone just say.. more..


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