September Morn

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

SEPTEMBER MORN

 

You stepped out of my dreams

into my September morn

dappled sunlight caressing

autumn’s coloured leaves

bright and perfect

love bloomed from shadows of the

night into the full embrace

of the warming sun

touching

our souls with the heat

of a poet’s passion

the haunting harmony

of a soft symphony

played in our happy hearts

beating as metronomes

in perfect rhythm to the

dance of love in

sacred garden of delights ~

　

　

　

© 2010 Helena

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my words.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Helena Dear,
It is truly I whom sincerely and gratefully "thank You" for sharing these enthrallingly beautiful words of sheer tenderness to Autumnal love and affection — my heart dips a swooning sigh with the sweetness of your poetic voice!
This wondrously warming moment of sensations, inspired by your endearing words, so deeply-sensual and gentle to the senses, have stirred my fervor, virtually melting me into my socks … such is the glorious power of excellently composed poetry.
Please, forgive me for wandering back to your first posting, Helena … I wanted a fresh glimpse of you, and how wondrously pleasing it is.

The poem, the picture? Obviously, I love them! : )
Thank you so very-very much for sharing your heavenly sweet heart and alluring skills … hugs! ⁓ Richard

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'September Morn'
Helen Margaret Crutchett,
This poem is one of words which are sweet and kind..I understand the softness and the nurturing feeling which emanates from your words. Not a confusing or fast paced experience portrayed but just slow and a process of love explained with natural metaphors which I love. Nature's beauty and giving qualities!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Jamestown]

This is so well written! Beautiful and fluent to match the gorgeous picture you
selected, I always admire your poetic grace:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Fluidity grows as one reads the lines to this verse... a reader can be enumerated by the content and carried through an escape in time...

[Lilly]

So beautifully written and lovely images. This has such a wonderful flow and I like the use of alliteration in this.
A beautiful poem.

[James Paulin]

Although spring must be in the air in September in Oz, I love your rendition of fall embracing summer.

[Tate Morgan]

That flowed like river to the sea

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this. It has a nice flow and feel.

[Steve]

Expertly written.......

[Coyote Poetry]

Fall create a gift from nature. Changing of the color of the leaves leave us in wonder. The power and beauty of nature is hard to describe. I like your poem. A beautiful description of nature and fall. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Coyote